Is the door supposed to look like that at our view? If not, then you have your perspective off. We're looking at the room dead-on, so the door shouldn't have a higher corner. Her cleavage is too high up on her. Her left arm is oddly bulding out at her elbow, area. Look in the mirror and you'll see the arm doesn't buldge drastically like that. You've got her legs bent incorrectly. 90% calves should be behind her out of our view, not to her left (and bent like that looks rather painful, ouch! I'm surprised she doesn't have the expression of "My knees are sprained!!"). Her right arm looks like it's bent just for the sake of being placed on the pipe. Her neck looks like it connects the very VERY back of her head. She's not a swan, she's a human! I'm not sure why the window seems like it's buldging from all sides.

You should study the human figure more from life so you can get an understanding of how comfortable poses look. Your characters will look more lively if you do lots of studies and apply what you know onto your works. I hope the information I have given you helps you in your quest to improvement

It's an interesting setting, and it's good that you're working on backgrounds and real scenes, to get away from the "standing-in-nothing" kind of portrait, this gives more life to the drawing.
But I also wonder about that door. Is it supposed to look like that or is due to perspective?
To give it more depth I'd recomend that you had put her a bit further away from the wall, now it seems like she's almost smashed up against it. I also think that a shadow would appear where she sits, since there is apparently a lightsource, and this would also add some shadows and highlights on her. Her right arm looks a little bit weird too, and I would rather have it bend inwards, against her rather than away from her, it doesn't look very comfortable.
Other than that, nice work ^^

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Thank ya the door was funny but not quite how I wanted it and thanks again

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thanks

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You're welcome ^^
Ah, I see...

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sweet work!

Thanks

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